Detective Work: Revision and Writing

Abstract

<p>As writers, we may ask ourselves whether or not it is possible to write a perfect first draft. Regardless of the answer, we must admit that this type of writing eliminates a valuable tool in the writer's arsenal. Simultaneously the most rewarding and most frustrating part of writing, revision is absolutely vital. Although revision means editing for grammar and spelling errors, which is the common conception of the process, it also means restructuring, re-writing characters, and sometimes research. The process can be discouraging, as all of the faults with a story come to the forefront, but this is possibly the most important time for a writer. To be able to recognize the shortcomings of your own work, in any discipline, shows the humility and awareness to produce fine work. Story: A young Middle Eastern man is found dead in an alley and Detective Max Richards must solve the case. Rain washing most of the evidence away, the only witness is an alluring Iraqi woman who may know more than she's letting on. As the case develops, Max throws himself deeper and deeper into the details as the coincidences pile up.</p><p>This presentation occurred at the Wright State University Campus-Wide Celebration of Research, Scholarship and Creative Activities on April 8, 2011</p>